Tuesday 5 April 2011

Smokers

Smokers outside
The hospital
Doors
One coughs up
Blood
Whilst the other one
Draws

Notice here that I've added a touch of flare to this self-titled masterpiece by making the 3rd and 7th line rhyme. Incredible.
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